CyberneticCupcake's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Oxygen episode 1]

I do like the story so far. The best advice I can give to you is to work on your timing and pacing in animation; some shots go on too long while others are much too short.

CutseyWaffle responds:

Aaahw thank you so much. Yeah definetly the timing is a huge mess. I'll try to pay more attentions to that! Thank you!

[Ten of Hearts (Fan Animation)]

A bit too rough for my tastes, but very moody and poignant. I'd suggest paying more attention to keeping a consistent shape to the characters while in-betweening.

alexgoodwin94 responds:

Thanks for the response, and 100% agreed on the consistency. It was something I noticed that bugged me too, and I'll try to work on it.